I’d like to give a shout out to Hope at FedEx-Kinkos.

Thank you girl, I couldn’t have done it without you! Here is the draft of my final project. I already have some ideas on how I want to change it around and on what I think needs to be added, but I want to wait to see what the class thinks before I divulge that information. Also, sadly an early draft of the text is what made it on this version, so feel free to comment on the text, but know it has been significantly edited and that more edits are pending. It is your comments on the visuals and the aesthetics of the projects which I am hoping for.

Final Project Rough Draft 12 2 10

Advertisements

3 thoughts on “I’d like to give a shout out to Hope at FedEx-Kinkos.

  1. I think your visuals are very nice. I do have a question, however. Your layout seems to fill the entire page. Are you sure you were working with the appropriate margins and gutters? It also feels somewhat sparse: are you sure you don’t want to take more chances with some sort of background effect or color? (Maybe using a photograph of the location?) While your maps and photographs provide variety, it feels somewhat like you need something to make it pop, visually speaking.

  2. Pingback: Comments « Cartography and Maps

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s